Yesterday I sat down with Katy and went through the script to help me write up a final version for Katy to create the storyboards from. Although Katy had been struggling to help with the script earlier in the project, she put in a lot of input when deciding where the scenes should be cut and so on. I really appreciated her input and I found it really useful to hear what she believed would be the most effective way to split the story up. This helped me to eliminate some unnecessary dialogue from our robin character, which freed up a couple of seconds extra from behavioural actions.
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| Edited Boar script |
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| Edited Boar script |
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| Edited Wolf script |
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Edited Wolf script
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We looked at ways in which we could make the two separate scripts flow into one running dialogue whilst keeping the message clear and coherent to an audience. This required some sticky notes and lots of pen squiggles, but I feel that we managed to split the two scripts and stitch them back together in a way that creates some humour but keeps our message clear. Katy seemed pleased with our final decisions and I was also happy with what we had decided upon.
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| Final script |
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| Final script |
With the elimination of the extra wolf character and cutting from one character to the other for the same questions, I feel that we have managed to cut down our script to a decent size that will easily fit into 2 minutes with the behavioural actions included. Overall, I'm really pleased with our story and I feel that is clear enough for Katy to start creating storyboards from.
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